Handwritten story titled 'Mouse Gets the Hiccups' with various annotations and crossings out.

Story Consulting

This is the very first draft of my first published picture book (by no means my first writtenpicture book). It is (thus far) the only first draft of mine that appeared nearly fully formed- although my ‘mouse’ changed to a penguin, the story of ‘Little Penguin Gets the Hiccups’ is pretty much there. Usually, my stories go through dozens of rewrites before they are ready for the public eye, meaning that:

A. I have lots of practice at editing

B. Looking at someone else’s writing makes for a rather lovely break

I offer consultation for children’s stories, whether you need help with the words, the pictures, or how the two work together.

Why Work With Me?

• Over a decade of experience in children’s publishing

• Author and illustrator of eleven books with Big Five publishers

• Former teacher who knows what connects with young readers

• Insight into both traditional and self-publishing routes

My Process

I am committed to providing feedback that is valuable to all the people I work with, so will read your picture book manuscript (or 1000 words of a longer project) to assess whether my services might be worthwhile to you before taking on a project.

1. Initial video call – We’ll discuss your story and your goals.

2. Detailed critique – I review your manuscript and provide feedback- both big-picture and line-by-line edits. After having time to respond to suggested edits, there will be one more round of revisions, followed by…

3. Concluding video call – An opportunity to discuss the revised version of the story, and to provide avenues for further exploration.

Pricing

Picture book critique (up to 1500 words): $600

Handwritten notes and sketches about bears and a roller coaster. The notes describe a story or a scene involving bears, their behavior, and exploration, with some doodles of bears and a roller coaster.

Interested in working together?

Please fill out the form, and I will be in touch!